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Alice Commission

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Chibi Commission for :iconannabirdcat:

Working on defining my styles a bit :D Hope you like it!
I made the Koi fish a plushie if that's okay :meow:

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

This is really cool <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>
The only thing I noticed was that where the top of the head leading up from the beak seems to be a bit too flat. Try adding a bit more shape to that part when you draw this character next time.
Also when shading try to add more texture and definition. The colors on the beak seem to be a bit blocked in. I don't know if that is how the character is supposed to be but it would help to blend the colors together just a bit to make the area seem smoother, being the fact that beaks are very smooth in look and texture.
OVERALL: Very nice drawing and color combinations <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=";) (Wink)"/>